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Assessing--the
Holistic Scale
LETTER GRADES
(a traditional description)
Provided by Sister Winifred Morgan
Its treatment of its
subject is superficial; its theme lacks discernible organization; its
prose is garbled or stylistically primitive. Mechanical errors are
frequent. In short, the ideas, organization and style fall far below
what is acceptable college writing.
Its treatment and
development of the subject are as yet only rudimentary. While
organization is present, it is neither clear nor effective. Sentences
are frequently awkward, ambiguous, and marred by serious mechanical
errors. Evidence of careful proofreading is scanty or nonexistent. The
whole piece, in fact, gives the impression of having been conceived and
written in haste.
It is generally
competent; it meets the assignment, has few mechanical errors, and is
reasonably well organized and developed. The actual information it
delivers, however, seems thin and commonplace. One reason for that
impression is that the ideas are typically cast in the form of vague
generalities—generalities that prompt the confused reader to ask
marginally: “In every case?” “Exactly how large?” “Why?” “But how many?”
Stylistically the C paper has other shortcomings as well: the opening
paragraph does little to draw the reader in; the final paragraph offers
only perfunctory wrap-up; the transitions between paragraphs are often
bumpy; the sentences, besides being a bit choppy, tend to follow a
predictable (hence monotonous) subject-verb-object pattern; and the disction is occasionally marred by unconscious repetitions, redundancy,
and imprecision. The C paper then, while it gets the job done, lacks
both imagination and intellectual rigor, and hence does not invite a
rereading.
It is significantly
more than competent. Besides being almost free of mechanical errors, the
B paper delivers substantial information—that is, substantial in both
quantity and interest-value. Its specific points are logically ordered,
well developed, and unified around a clear organizing principle that is
apparent early in the paper. The opening paragraph draws the reader in;
the closing paragraph is both conclusive and thematically related to the
opening. The transitions between paragraphs are for the most part
smooth, the sentence structures pleasingly varied. The diction of the B
paper is typically much more concise and precise than that found in the
C paper. Occasionally, it even shows distinctiveness—i.e., finesse and memorability. On the whole then, a B paper makes the reading experience
a pleasurable one, for it offers substantial information with few
distractions.
Perhaps the principal
characteristic of the A paper is its rich content. Some people describe
that content as “meaty,” others as “dense,” still others as “packed.”
Whatever, the information delivered is such that one feels significantly
taught by the author, sentence after sentence, paragraph after
paragraph. The A paper is also marked by stylistic finesse: the title
and opening paragraph are engaging; the transitions are artful; the
phrasing is tight; tone enhances the purposes of the paper. Finally, the
A paper, because of its careful organization and development, imparts a
feeling of wholeness and unusual clarity. Not surprisingly then, it
leaves the reader feeling bright, thoroughly satisfied, and eager to
reread the piece. |
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