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Revision vs. Editing etc.
Revision requires thinking about your
paper in a new way.
To adequately revise a draft of a paper,
you must be able to see it from a different perspective. That
perspective most often is the reader’s perspective. Your paper
may be perfectly clear to you, the writer. You know the
material. These are your ideas. You know what you mean. But what
did you actually write? Did you explain as fully as you could?
Did you make it clear when you were moving on to a new argument?
Did you relate all your examples to the question you set out to
answer? You don’t know the answer to these questions unless you
can imagine your paper as the reader receives it.
A real revision then involves clarifying
your argument, adding needed material, taking out things that
don’t belong. It involves thinking your paper through again.
Often you don’t know what you’re really writing about until
you’ve written it. Only when you’ve gotten to the end of your
draft do you see the point you were making. To revise, you often
need to turn the paper on its head, and put that point at the
beginning. Then you need to make sure that argument is followed
all the way through. So some paragraphs may have to go, even
though they were well-written.
Editing is the final stage of revision,
when you make changes to your sentences to make them read
better. Revision requires thinking about your whole paper. But
you may edit your paper sentence by sentence. Many people edit
backward, starting with the last sentence. This allows you to
focus on the clarity of each sentence separately. In the editing
stage, you correct spelling errors, add or change punctuation,
change wording. Editing is a clean-up operation. Your paper will
say essentially the same thing after you’ve edited it, but it
will sound smoother and clearer.
Proofreading is the final stage of
editing. You are looking for spelling errors, wrong words,
punctuation errors, that you might not have noticed after
editing. You proofread when everything else is done. You don’t
intend to change any words. You only want to find mistakes.
Often people are so sick of their own writing after they’ve done
a lot of editing that it helps to have someone else proofread.
Spellcheck is a very unreliable method of
proofreading. If you aren’t a good speller in the first place,
Spellcheck very often makes things worse. If you’ve spelled
“particularly” incorrectly, Spellcheck advises you to substitute
some other word such as “practicum,” which makes no sense at
all. Honestly, your instructors would rather have a poorly
spelled paper than an unreadable one. The less confident you are
about your proofreading skills, the more strongly I would advise
you to stay away from Spellcheck.
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